You must have had a wonderful visit to Rainbow Springs Macy. It's really exciting seeing different animals that we usually only see in books or on TV. If you read your work aloud you might find a word that does not look quite right. Perhaps you could pop back into your google doc and correct it so it matches the rest of your very carefully written story Thanks for sharing on your blog Macy.
You must have had a wonderful visit to Rainbow Springs Macy. It's really exciting seeing different animals that we usually only see in books or on TV.
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Thanks for sharing on your blog Macy.
Nice Job very well done with your writing Macy.
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Wow Macy! You must have had lots of fun at Rainbow Springs. What was your favourite part of your trip? From Eliala
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